The Coming
The woman came, Samaritan by birth
To the well by divine appointment.
The Jesish man spoke to her
“Give me water.”
At first shocked, she defined the cultural taboo,
“I am a Samaritan; you are a Jew.”
“If you knew me,” he answered,
“you would want living water.”
“Are you greater than Jacob?” she asked.
Oh, yes, she knew her history.
She also knew her need.
“Living water,” the Jew mentioned it again.
She stepped closer, her errand forgotten.
“Yes, this is what I want.”
“You have had five husbands and the man you have now
Is not your husband.”
Ah, yes, he knew her history.
He also knew her need.
“Prophet, sir,” she countered with respect,
“some worshipped in the mountains
Some worshipped in Jerusalem.”
This man spoke of true worship,
“in Spirit and in truth” and of
“salvation”.
Her hopes soared at the word,
“Messiah will speak this way…” she ventured,
Her heart realizing the truth, as he answered,
“I am He.”
Spirit soaring
Waterpot abandoned
She turned, splashing through living water,
To tell others
Messiah had come.
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